I think the colour balance is a little dull. For the bottom two pictures which somehow makes the picture ordinary. If you're using a camera with white balance option try using that or software manipulation :D
Suggestions for the third picture, try to decrease the saturation and increase the hue when using software manipulation. It would make the colour more vivid. When taking architectural photographs, focus on the building. The trees are obstructing the view and attraction of the overall building. Focus on a building can amplify its monumental sentiments and details.
pai seh a..dunno if i am qualified to judge others masterpiece or not.
1 st photo:"throw away" the stairs part or shift the camera to right bit.the photo looked messy with the stair. focus on the lines instead.for e.g the lines of the mosaic floor and the rail .
2nd photo: i think is better to take the lamp at between evening and nite & when it is lighting so that it shows the "beauty" of a lighting.plus, the photo background is plain(no cloud) sky can make the photo more dramatic.
3rd photo: instead of taking "straight straight" view of the mosque, try capturing from another perspective like putting the mosque to the right top corner of your photo, then the pic. will be stg like story telling."long long time ago..there is a mosque covered with mysterious,thick jungle...therefore,i think trees is potential become 1 of the actors as well as it can give a story to the photo, is not obstructing, victor...if the focus is not on architecture of the mosque.
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I think the colour balance is a little dull. For the bottom two pictures which somehow makes the picture ordinary. If you're using a camera with white balance option try using that or software manipulation :D
Suggestions for the third picture, try to decrease the saturation and increase the hue when using software manipulation. It would make the colour more vivid. When taking architectural photographs, focus on the building. The trees are obstructing the view and attraction of the overall building. Focus on a building can amplify its monumental sentiments and details.
pai seh a..dunno if i am qualified to judge others masterpiece or not.
1 st photo:"throw away" the stairs part or shift the camera to right bit.the photo looked messy with the stair. focus on the lines instead.for e.g the lines of the mosaic floor and the rail .
2nd photo: i think is better to take the lamp at between evening and nite & when it is lighting
so that it shows the "beauty" of a lighting.plus, the photo background is plain(no cloud) sky can make the photo more dramatic.
3rd photo: instead of taking "straight straight" view of the mosque, try capturing from another perspective like putting the mosque to the right top corner of your photo, then the pic. will be stg like story telling."long long time ago..there is a mosque covered with mysterious,thick jungle...therefore,i think
trees is potential become 1 of the actors as well as it can give a story to the photo, is not obstructing, victor...if the focus is not on architecture of the mosque.
Nice use of lead in's in the first pic.
Thank you everyone who actually gave critical comments. That is why we post our photographs here right.
Putrajaya, is why I am here.
People say Putrajaya is best taken at night. Maybe you can try that and post :D
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